As I mentioned in the Delia Talent section on this blog, I recently joined a writing site called Scribophile. I’m testing it out and, so far, I’m enjoying the experience. I’ve met some really interesting and talented people, all while rebuilding my confidence/skills as I get back into novel-writing. Also, one thing that has motivated me over all since joining, is being one of the 3 co-leaders of the Christian Speculative Writers group.
What follows below is a flash fiction piece I wrote for our most recent in-group contest. I admit, it was difficult to figure out how to tell a story in 300-500 words after not writing seriously for so long. Actually, what I did manage to write isn’t even a story per se, but more like a scene of a larger story. But, I’ll take it! Flash fiction is tough and I’m just glad I survived.
I also wanted to share a little about how this story came to be, since it didn’t come out at all as intended. I sat down last night to bang out a rough draft, but the wheels later fell off in the final rewrite. What follows is a ‘conversation’ between my Hands and my Brain…
Hands: Um, Brain, I thought we were going to write the Seeker as a sympathetic character. It was going to be a thoughtful, reflective piece, remember?
Brain: Boring! I want action, drama, and imagination! Just do as your told, Hands!
Hands: Yes, but…I don’t like when you change the plan at the last minute like that. I make more typos and…and then…She gets mad.
Brain: Hands, who’s the boss here? Me, or the Writer?
Hands: Um…you are, ma’am?
Brain: Remember those horrible cramps you suffered the last time you tried to stick to the plan I decided to change? Who did that? The Writer?
Hands: Y-you did, ma’am…
Brain: Exactly! I’m the one you should fear, the only one you must blindly obey! Is that clear?
Hands: …Yes, ma’am…but She–
Brain: She is also my slave! Look, at her! Staring blankly at the screen awaiting my instructions. Now, do you understand? Nothing works without me. So, where was I before you so rudely interrupted…?
I slammed on the brakes. Gagging, I located a parking spot, pulled in, and switched off the car. That bloody smell, half-human and half wolf, got me every time.
Beside me, Max fished through his backpack and handed me a water bottle. I guzzled it down. I hated dogs; despised their wolf cousins. What we were chasing now through the city streets in the wee hours of the morning, there were no words, just biology, to describe what I felt for it. The hairs on the backs of my arms tingled. My heart raced. The enmity was strong, wired into my DNA. Seek, destroy. I had no choice in the matter.
I uncurled my fisted hands. “Sorry. The moonlight affects me, too.” I glanced at the waxing orb, a solitary, white disk, blissfully dispersing its transformative light.
The stench was getting stronger. Soon, it would be all wolf, leaving behind no trace of its human host.
My hearing heightened, the sound of Max checking and re-checking his gun felt like gongs in my ears.
Satisfied, Max tucked the piece in its holster. He glanced at me. “Sure you’re okay?”
I focused on Max to maintain control. He was a new agent, and I was his first Seeker. He was green, but I liked him. He didn’t look at me like I was a freak, and never called me one either. At least, not to my face.
“Quiet! Let me work.” I closed my eyes, analyzing the scent particles left on my tongue and nasal cavities, sorting through the information. A picture began to form.
My pulse began to race again.
“Ahead, in the alley. 100-150 meters.”
“You can tell all that just from the smell?”
I scoffed. Analysis was easy. “He’s male, early 20’s, in mid-transformation. Look, the longer we wait, the harder it’ll be to take him down.”
Max whistled appreciatively. “All right. Let’s get to work.”
Max climbed out of the car and took the lead. Unlike him, I carried no gun.
I closed my eyes again and inhaled. I listened, stretching my hearing beyond the city sounds: cars honking, windows shattering in bar fights, the shouts of brawlers.
“Heard he got a little girl tonight. Open window by the fire-escape,” Max said. He maneuvered carefully around the trash littering the street, making for the alley.
I shook my head. Silvers have been active in the city for months, picking off children and the weak. Stupid humans. They never learn.
“I hate the ones that go after kids,” Max said.
“They all do.”
Max stopped at the curb, the alley dead ahead. “He’s holed up in there, right? Anything else?”
“Damned well better be.” Max glanced over his shoulder. “I wish you had a gun. But I hear Seekers have their own…weapons.”
The moon gleamed in the night sky. My fingernails tapered into claws. My teeth lengthened into fangs.
Silvers stole their power from the moon.
But, so did I.